tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13609842.post7107547989219480246..comments2023-10-30T09:26:32.732+00:00Comments on Now's the time: dog's shadow surf-kite movie-makerAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06972049290586377462noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13609842.post-59032294675362902782012-10-02T17:11:12.804+01:002012-10-02T17:11:12.804+01:00RR Something similar had occurred to me, but less ...RR Something similar had occurred to me, but less well formulated. I am grateful for your comment. At the moment I can only respond by saying: different blog, different voice, or because sometimes the stories have fifferent narrators, different voices. Now that you have mentioned it, may be a new narrator voice will emerge. I'm too close to them at them moment and because the stories seem to pour forth, there is little time to revise or modify. On the whole I would rather keep them flowing than spend too long worrying about stylistic matters important as they are. Thanks again for your helpful response.<br /><br />L It seemed intent on posing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972049290586377462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13609842.post-33123230679514089272012-10-02T10:52:19.417+01:002012-10-02T10:52:19.417+01:00Joyce loves these photographs. The shadow of the d...Joyce loves these photographs. The shadow of the dog seems to spring to life against the background, and the bird on the ledge seems to relish having its photo taken.Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07642126053527835870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13609842.post-36040970011161412042012-10-02T10:43:12.053+01:002012-10-02T10:43:12.053+01:00Sorry, a better adjective: detached (the intention...Sorry, a better adjective: detached (the intentionally non-engaged, non-participating observer).Roderick Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16828395545197001637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13609842.post-65338989349812799832012-10-02T08:56:24.121+01:002012-10-02T08:56:24.121+01:00You must forgive me: your short stories spill out ...You must forgive me: your short stories spill out and I can rarely given them the responses they deserve. It's not at all like commenting on a conventional post. But one thought recurs and it's ironic since something similar occurred to you when I was writing GT. The gentle, deliberately unforceful, slightly laconic style of your posts seems much more appropriate to your short stories. Has this occurred to you? Roderick Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16828395545197001637noreply@blogger.com